Not bad Mariana but some things to improve please...
- Costume and Props - get some images to support - Is there a clip you can add to show the film opening? - Check spellings (see Mrs. Tubman?) - Actors - how do they look and behave? Why do you think they make it hard for us to see them (something to do with the genre? Or Enigma maybe?)? - Why is the font like that? - Camera and Sound - you must mention these
Remember to always say WHY you think all these things have been done (e.g. low key lighting, chalkboard writing, etc.)
Not bad Mariana but some things to improve please...
ReplyDelete- Costume and Props - get some images to support
- Is there a clip you can add to show the film opening?
- Check spellings (see Mrs. Tubman?)
- Actors - how do they look and behave? Why do you think they make it hard for us to see them (something to do with the genre? Or Enigma maybe?)?
- Why is the font like that?
- Camera and Sound - you must mention these
Remember to always say WHY you think all these things have been done (e.g. low key lighting, chalkboard writing, etc.)
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